Dont wanna cry

Make everything Ie es wordey so you have breath - too many words take too much breath . / In the first verse change 3 syllable words into 2 like "difficult " becomes "hard " all to cut down on words . //// we have to work on opening up the nasel capities with warmups to have the song less nasal mmore open voice so I am going to recommend these " O " excersises -https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yvb4Rl21-UY&t=458s- copy and paste this url . Need to go over the melody to make it a little less "sing- song-y and changes in the melody would make it less momotone. . Bridge-should do something exciting with your voice we will go through this . the melody needs to change a little more between verse/ chorus/ and bridge so we the audience can identify it.